Hello, @shortsegments. This is a decent and very nice review of that poem. It reminded me of a lot of things. Hmmm, It really is nice. I am glad that you shared it alongside with your opinion.
I do have a suggestion though.
You mentioned that you found the poem online. I was hoping to see a link to the poem. Citation is very important and linking the original source of the poem at the beginning or the end of your review would not hurt. I am aware that the author is unknown, however, I believe that a link to the poem still can be found.
I really want to learn more about this poem. I appreciate the time you took to review it. Well done! I look forward to seeing your next awesome review.
Cheers!
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Hi Knowledges,
I appreciate you reading my post and providing me feedback. I have edited my post to improve its presentation and added the citation / source for the poem.
Thank you,
Shortsegments
Edits:
Conclusion:
I really like this poem and it’s message or meaning to me was that it takes some bad to enable you to appreciate the good. For example those whose cups have been dry and plates have been empty, appreciate a wet cup of water and a full plate of food, so much more then those who have always lived in abundance.
Citation: https://alltimeshortstories.com/i-wish-you-enough-story/