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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 13

in #writing7 years ago

Hmm, Taylor might have won the skirmish, and maybe he had to have it, because of Sinbad's approach. But I don't like it. Sinbad will want even more revenge now.

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Yes... there's a saying in writing - Don't show the gun unless you are going to use it.

In other words, that conflict has been put there for a reason (I don't quite know what reason yet, my brain hasn't told me that far ahead).

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