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RE: At least I still got my cave [Day 45]
very nice poem, I understood the overall Idea
but I couldn't understand this part :
It'll read. Maybe get your buddy
That draws good,
I think it will be better if you used
It'll read. Maybe find your buddy
another thing really I couldn't understand the rhythm, but it's normal I'm not skilled
and this is just my opinion
Hey @khalifandro! This is written in "colloquial english," so when it says "get your buddy" it means "ask your friend." It's a kind of slang. Normally I don't write this way, but I was in a particularly odd mood last night when I wrote it. I appreciate your feedback!