Wow...you were so detailed that I felt like I was on that walk too...and at the end I felt my heart break...really good writing...I could feel the joy and pain...
Wow...you were so detailed that I felt like I was on that walk too...and at the end I felt my heart break...really good writing...I could feel the joy and pain...
thank you @kayleigh-alesta. I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you could hear my voice in it. it's hard to be clear sometimes. but then again, that's why we write. that is to say, to share emotion and experiences. thanks again!
Yes I felt it....you're very welcome I look forward to reading more from you:)