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RE: [Original Novella] Persistence of Vision, Part 1
I'm not sure why but this beginning really interested me a lot . The part I liked was how you talked about her disappearing and the dad saying it could be because he was always working .
It's like in today's world where the parents are too busy with preparing the kids future and don't realize what their kids might be going through . Sometimes we just don't give our kids enough time to actually know them ..