Psychopaths in a relationship - Finish the Story Challenge!

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She closed the door gently, but could not lift her hand from the knob. She leaned against the wall, frozen, with the confused expression of someone who forgot why they walked into a room. She pushed the door back in slowly, careful not to make any noise, held it for a few seconds, and closed it again. Do not! she thought Go, please go! Her legs started moving awkwardly, like they had forgotten how to walk. She pressed the button for the lift, but could not get in when the doors opened, and there was motionless until the doors closed again. Make a note of! Maybe I should go back and write a note! She started walking back quickly, so that reason would not catch up with her.

Trembling with fear, and with feelings confused by the strange love I felt; he took his lipstick and wrote on the wall "I must go, our love became an obsession and so it is very difficult to be free". Her husband, Jhon, was of strong character and uncontrolled jealousy, had taken him to beat her to release the hatred he felt when his wife talked and went for a walk with his friends; her behavior was silent, but capable of assassinating him without any compassion, all this combined, those that are leading to a predictable destiny, death.

While she was writing on the wall with tears in her eyes, and pain in her heart, her husband was lying on the bed; exhausted by sexual relations that had had that night and drugged with marijuana because that was his vice. A love out of the ordinary, the more they wanted, the more damage they did to each other. None was unfaithful at least until proven otherwise. Shattered by what she was living and knowing that 10 years of marriage were going to be extinguished that night, she made a superhuman effort and left the room little by little. When he reached the street he hid in an alley, he thought and thought, he remembered that he had not brought his wallet, so he decided to go and look for it and go far, far away, at least to Paris.

Jhon after two hours woke up; he read the note on the wall, his heart shattered into a thousand pieces with each word. He destroyed the room, he did not know how long he had slept, not the slightest idea of ​​where his wife might be. While he was sinking into depression he started smoking a lot, opened a bottle of Vooka and called his lover, his only consolation. Karla her lover, came to comfort Jhon quickly, He without thinking and possessed by drugs, alcohol and hatred, took her strong arms and undressed her. The act began, and about 5 minutes later his wife arrived stealthily.

Alice, Jhon's wife, came crazily, from outside the house you could hear John's cries repeating his name over and over again. Run to the room, before entering, take a weapon hidden under the carpet, and open the door cautiously. The first thing he sees is his man on his back and totally naked, he continues to observe and manages to see his lover, Alice whispers "We could change our destiny, but you insisted that it be this one". Jhon did not reach to turn around, her body received 4 bullets, she could not stand the pain of the experience and when she tried to commit suicide she died of a heart attack.

Psychopaths in a relationship.


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