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RE: The Limits of Justice - Writer's Block Writing Contest

in #writing8 years ago

This was fantastic. You have an excellent ability to describe a character's motivation. In this story, it was brief and embedded within the action perfectly. I'd say you hit the nail right on the head with this:

"His conscience was blacker than the asphalt under his wheels, but there was food on the table and rum in his glass."

Just amazing. Might be my favourite @steemedchitty original.

This needs more eyes. Upvoted and resteemed.

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Thanks man! I feel honored. As I've mentioned before, it's all about the characters, so I'm really happy hearing good feedback about the way I portray them or describe the inner workings of their minds.

Thanks for lending me your visibility!

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