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RE: ABANDONING RUMI: Chapter 1 — TWB First Chapter Challenge Entry
This is a great read, @katrina-ariel. I really enjoyed the suspense once the story kicked into gear. You have done such a nice job of creating an intriguing main character and circumstances. There are so many lyrical, beautifully worded moments in this chapter.
Blue-grey clouds loomed over the valley towards town, but the sun shone in the foreground, giving the mountains a golden glow that contrasted with the weather beyond. The horses and I stood in shadow, blending into the dull green-gold of the grass.
Tha is lovely!
Jayna, thank you for every time you've showed up for me and my writing. Your support means the world, and I'm so glad to have you as part of my writing community.