You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: A Man Is Thirsty (Redux)View the full contextinviter (51)in #writing • 8 years ago This writing is pretty well written, Thanks for sharing. This line was remarkable " But first, he needs to get laid. " :P
Just a cheap way to plant some shock value..
Haha Yeh, worked perfectly!
I liked the line but didn't find it all shocking :) Was waiting for it to be said.