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RE: Old School

in #writing6 years ago

You have a minor typo in the following sentence:

If I did try to force this review lesson they would have missed on of the most important learning experiences of their lives.
It should be one of the instead of on of the.

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Thank you for your suggestion beloved @grammarnazi. I considered your suggestion but found a better way to edit this. I love you too and your regime and the storm troopers. I know there is hope for you yet.

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