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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 26
Hello @michelle.gent I did not have time to read this chapter yesterday, I was very busy. But that does not mean that I forgot, so I went back to your chapter now :)
Liz should not have hinted to Taylor that she was Victor's daughter, I agree with these Zack's catch. The chapter was interesting and ended soon.
As they say - good for a little :)
one more interesting moment is "Kornikov - surname of Michael" the same surname from my friend :)
Thank you, I liked it
Thank you @frank1in, I appreciate your comments, always.
I don't always know what I'm doing when I write the story out... the characters dictate a lot of what gets written, so it was Liz's call on telling Taylor... or at least hinting :)
The name 'Kornikov' just popped into my head because I needed a surname :)