The most pleasant feature of your stories is that I start reading and do not have time to notice how I finished reading it.
I know a great director who just does a masterful dialogue - this is Quentin Tarantino. Dialogues in his films are interesting to listen to.
I can say the same about your stories, especially about this one. Dialogues are interesting to read, they are the main trump of this story :)
Thank you, I liked the chapter