Before reading this chapter, I advise everyone to first read the previous one. Even if you read it, at least remember what it says.
What I think about the second part, I liked how in detail you describe Zak's trip and the way he looks. Also, such described details of Zak's actions allow us to examine it in more detail in our imagination.
The plot is also very interesting, and knowing your other work, the plot promises to be exciting and interesting. I am sure in other chapters of the event will develop "on the increasing"
Thank you, I liked it