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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 12
during the reading I had a feeling that I was watching a gangster movie. Zak as a character with each important thing, his conversations, behavior becomes for me a respected character.
Dialogues and actions of the main characters, painted in detail that as before creates the feeling that this describes the real actions.
I like it, thank you @michelle.gent
Thank you. That's exactly the thing I wanted to get with Zack - a quiet confidence.