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RE: New Story - again written exclusively on Steemit - WiP - Bouncer Part 12
I love your writing because it is all kinds of awesome.
But, also, i love to read your work because i I learn SO much from it. This is a modelic descriptive piece. The way you describe the scene... the characters, the mood, the action, the location. Man, i swear i am taking notes here.
Thank you very much for sharing this, Michelle.
Thank you. I have to admit, I enjoy writing these action pieces. I like taking the reader to places they may never have been before.
I also feel like I'm learning too.
If ever you see something that doesn't work, please let me know. I'm always interested in what doesn't work.
You got it! I'll try to spot those rough edges.
Thank you!