Air, find your way

in #writing7 years ago

Time to break the chain, no pain
Don't be afraid but it won't change
Same old days, same old ways
The clock keeps turning, uh...
A dried up scene
Repeating everyday
The formula can't get away from me
A puppet played with inside a cage
Erase the noise...
Can you hear my voice?

Spit it out, throw it away
The pride of rationality
The sadness in a howling wind
Cries out to freedom
So let's go!
Throw off these chains!
Spread your wings!
Toward a blue world...

The sun beats down on the start of a single day
The same journey, a familiar story
I want to step into unknown territory
I know you can't stop me
Just like when I discovered the light
The wind's at my back so it's time to fly
Believe in yourself and take off right now
in the blue sky !

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A little bit critisim would be nice to improve my writing.

This well has meaning and logic in what you write; only people who comment on something is because they really like to read what you write; others only know how to observe and not to think like that happens with my post. Keep going greetings

Thanks for the reading. i appreciate you comments.

I am going to read more about your artcile. You have now one follower more.

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