This is a fluent narration, first of all. And this means already half of the task. Another element I like is the images that you give and the cinematic feeling. Plus the sense of suspence in the end. Well done!
This is a fluent narration, first of all. And this means already half of the task. Another element I like is the images that you give and the cinematic feeling. Plus the sense of suspence in the end. Well done!
Thank you!