Great tips! I especially have the appreciation for being as concise as possible. It gets on my nerves when I've read a wordy sentence and realize it could have been cut down to five words.

In some cases you need the length for a particular feel but sometimes it feels like the lengthening is done for no reason. (Not saying your post, BTW)

Anyway, always bring gum or deodorant before rescuing someone you have a fancy for. Lesson learned.