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RE: Finish The Story Contest: a familial gathering
Very Maltese Falcon feel with the old language and the bowler hat.
"Monsieur! The insurrectionists will guillotine you and the government will box you to GitMo!"
This made me lol.
The Madame and the New Orleans setting was just perfect enough to allow that feel to exist. But I must confess I haven't watched Maltese Falcon, but I have seen things inspired by such for sure. Anyways, I see someone has a keen eye on that little line; plays: La Guillotine Permanente
I agree, it had that 30s gangster film feel to it. Nice entry.
Thanks, @cyemela!