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RE: Improve your Writing (Development)
Are you sure you highlighted the right sentence in that paragraph? Most of it relates to the subject except "Behind the yard was an alley and then more houses." is a bit pointless and has no bearing on said cherry tree.
Mmm yes you are right, the example they gave was wrong
I thought it was strange? Keep it up though. I look forward to more of your stuff.