Started like a more less peaceful story until I read that Ganesh was eaten by the pigs. Then I didn't know what to expect. It continued like a peaceful story again until she saw Arjun. Poor old Arjun. I'm sure that Goatjira won't mind eating him :)

Great writing! The reader doesn't know what comes next and that's good as people want to read more and more to understand what is happening. I like how you describe Kyra's thinking. All her thoughts flow smoothly..

Thank you for sharing! Looking forward to the chapter ten! :)