Whew, just got home from driving out an hour away in a level 1 snow emergency. That was...interesting. Anyways, I'm getting to read the chapter now, and just felt like I should let you know since I didn't want my original comment to come off insincere or anything.

Although, I'm a bit offended that you're having a character talk smack about dueling banjos. Banjo's are the shit, and you'd be a lucky man to duel with them, sir! How dare you!