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RE: A Haunted House

in #writing6 years ago (edited)

Bravo! @khojo

Classic you with another breath taking traggic ending . I loved it. At first I was hoping for a cliche where everything will suddenly be alright again like nothing bad happened.

Now this leaves a lot of unanswered questions.

What's killing them or who killed them.

Could it be the realtor. Does he do this every time. The suspense is captivating .

Since the story is from the victims point of view the story is just right for he can only know what he perceives and not the unknown.

That said, the shutterstock image is really not needed you could have found a good free to use image from unsplash.

Dante is here No fear

Cheers

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Thanks a lot @dante31 for your insightful comment. I'll be sure to look up unsplash whenever I'm in need of a good photo. Thanks once again

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