Journeys through my paradox heart-ship

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Journeys through my paradox heart-ship

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Clinging to a middling rung,
I am dullness amplified.
Stretched and turned out into the
Frozen street I am sharpness excercised.
In childbook stories swaddling wrapped
Grappling with the inversion of stark reality:
Our world hazy with promise, grey with pride.

The method in which I glanced upon the city
Seeing only specks of adamantine clarity
Has faded, evanescent, from my lobes.
Crabs walk upon the hills: litter
Trails with fluorescent goo to
Mutate our beloved biomes
With a saturnalian twinge.
I make peace with the
Crustaceans in my
Spaceship heart
And soar alone.

My taut vessel,
My sweet vassal
Propel the wind,
My beloved castle!
.
Swing through orbit,
Direct the currents,
Cosmic shorelet,
Sole assurance.
.
Deny my dullness,
Hands unhooked
Unpry my wholeness,
Hale, uncrooked.


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@d-pend
11/19/17

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You never seem to run out of wonderful new expressions and creative thought. Your mind and inner spirit must be a place of amazing senses, wonderful ideas and a creative spirit that keeps moving forward! I am so glad that you are able to let everything flow out and to share your unique and wonderful gifts! If I don't get to comment sooner, wishing you are wonderful and Happy Thanksgiving! Wishing you much joy and happiness!

Your fantasy creates an imagination from other planets, touching the stars with yours infinite talent. Amazing poetry my friend ...

The distant planets grace me with their beams
Solar radiation grazes upon the fodder of my dreams

Exellent poetry - amazing answer my friend tip! 0.1

Very beautiful indeed, Definitely takes one to a far off place.

Thank you for reading, my friend. I appreciate your support too! Glad it took you somewhere.

My taut vessel,
My sweet vassal
Propel the wind,
My beloved castle!

Fantastic rhythmic pattern, this is beautiful, and the rhymes strike a vocal sound. I love it, keep writing @d-pend

Thanks, that part was fun to write, bit of a tongue-twister XD
I'm always grateful for your encouragement @josediccus. Thank you!!

I got you man, you are the best here for me 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wonderful and extraordinary photo.... I think,,, you are good writer..love to read your story.
upvoted

Thanks a lot Robert, my only regret is I do not know the names of the artists to credit them for their fine creations...!

Choosing just the right images really highlight this piece. Upvoted.

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the feedback!

realmente eres sorprendente amigo tienes talento! up vote para ti

Gracias como siempre mi amigo!

Has been a while, great work as usual

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Awesome poetry

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