A Meeting of Five Strangers
A Meeting of Five Strangers
.a scene in mixed verse
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by @d-pend
A Meeting of Five Strangers
Narrator:
What stilted assembly is this
in dark locale obscured from sense?
New-sent forth upon the haunches
of that skittish nether muse-steed
who into pregnant mire launches
mortals sick with apprehension
to the bitter moor-stalk's sap
that curl'd affect, anguished tension
might unfurl and soft disperse.
With harsh alkalinic remedy,
ferment-swirlèd bee-lush symphony—
what brings this midnight sentinel
with camphorous touch
to this dun niche of strangers met?
O unseen Guide, may my pen glide
as high as pinions mine may soar
to view from vantage such companions
motley-crewed in stygian moor.
Humbly do I beckon, calm reposed,
judgement eschewed—
aloft the air in matters bare
though knowing not the name, what care?
The five that speak and share unnamed
within this verse, though unproclaimed
take up parade-tail, trotting still, fear not.
For life full kens its own sweet mare,
though all our quillings lack its title:
still we take, O my dear reader,
up the seat and up the bridle!
Now speak Sage, so I no more
with clumsy speech will bore
your precious eyes that read on page
or ears that hear this joy and rage.
...
Five Strangers sit in a half-circle;
all around is total darkness
save an iron lantern between them.
...
The Sage:
"I shall give an invocation brief
in rambling words, a minute's thief
while ponder we this place we sit.
So for a space, fears may unknit.
If I eschew the rules of grammar,
orderly verse, mense-silk-sick hammer—
forgive my stiff, decrepit age
for I am naught but a humble sage."
Sage's Invocation:
"Living is but a leapfrog turnstile
to turn the while:
the bane of fair trajectory,
to beguile fate's face
with conversant murmurings not heard
but seen to play upon ill humor's strings
in the guise of quick-redd'ning or pallidified favors
that throw eldritch tones upon the breeze
with each respective grimace rung
in registers too rare for ear to seize upon
who's long-attuned to earthsong sung.
An ill-assembled smattering of wits
dashed abstract in daubs of dye,
the all expansive whims of preference
which ever revolve celestial houses
in the castled firmament:
switch harsh locales for more propitious skies
to build their starry armament.
May diamond wit and webbèd heart
bejewel mind-net and seize the toad:
Insight your shield, discernment's sword
will usher you 'long winding road.
Not the measuring of one specific ray
but their compounding whole, prolific day
whose body breath to ours must give:
and so, just so, in truth we ever live."
With darkened countenance
and a scowl the Dismal replies.
...
The Dismal:
"These may be sage, bewitching words
or folly cursed, or pure absurd;
but tell me, what's the import
of this chaos all-entangled?
Have I not through contemplation, noise,
peace, strife, sport, and ploys,
unabashed epicury in rounds extemporaneous
shown that same nature-ennobling deference
as ocelous stem of glade to fiery hounds
of wildfire bares its nape that they may seize upon
its tender neck to turn all life to ashen urn?
Have I not considered, rejected, recovered, renounced
in the smithing of a soul-circlet drawn from awareness-ore
the weight and levity of the moment's grasping
to be further smelted by each successive pawstep?
Was I not a proper meek doe to the slaughterous intent
of the world's leonine maw? Even, lo,
as lion communes with inverted pyre
of cobra of emerald Thoth,
who with mesmerizing eye
strikes rainbow batrachian of whim
in grisly embrace, she with him,
both torn, unto their cosmic cradles fly
and thus bereft of vigor—die."
Swayed not by this morbidity,
speaks the Celebrant with a smile.
...
The Celebrant:
"In merriment and song repose,
unroll a bed of lushest rose!
And for our weary here
bring mead, and meat, and meal in rows!
Dwell not on such vexation,
life has abundance enough to sate.
Stronger souls than yours have fall'n
To the mendicant—false ingrate!
See the loft of midday cloud,
whispering morning that precedes her,
decked with dew, ambrosial shroud
keep all that would impede her.
Gaze upon fair creatures
who against all odds arise,
and raise their shining countenance
with mistborn fiery eyes.
Feel the silent music
of the temperate and the cold,
each sun its beauty hums
for willing spirits to behold!"
At the mention of winter
the Griever starts, forlorn.
...
The Griever:
"Yet every note intoned by fire is alone,
the heart is rent in twain
by privacy of thought and feeling thrown:
all love is in vain.
And if ten thousand years could I
be with my dearest friend—
what of the million more, apart,
which we must needs append?"
The Sage's knowing grin
suddenly widens.
...
The Sage:
"Ha! But what is this?
A gathering passing dull.
Unstop the flask, resound the chime,
that half-filled may be full!
Time to speak and space to think
and womb in which to sleep:
simple charms upon the blink
pass life through cumbrous deep.
Such a clump of strangers met
in this eclectic hall
methinks occasion rare enough
to throw some sort of ball!"
With flitting eyes
the Fearul replies.
...
The Fearful:
"What sort of dance? For seems I sense
a pall descending 'pon me.
All this speech of sundry sort
inscribes de'il-trace along me."
The Dismal interjects.
...
The Dismal:
"Of some of you I'd sure expect
a nobler urge than this.
To revel? Sure, the Celebrant,
but Sage, too, rambling thus?
For seven decades have I strode
o'er plied and rocky turf,
to view primordial stone erode
by cruel, insistent surf.
What balm's in song, and rhyme, and fare
befitting kings and queens,
that seals the skin to deathly wave
which ever-harsh, demeans?
More fools are they that hope
upon mere trinkets and delights
than this sad Fearful here
that every turn of chance indicts."
The Celebrant speaks,
with fond-sad look.
...
The Celebrant:
"Ah Sage, sweet friend, ah Dismal too!
I pity naught but all you
who refuse to widen warm orb-path
before your pulsing step
and sink into such aging wrath
as hellish reaper yearly brings
with keenest blade before all springs
unleash their glow on slumberous Earth.
Shall you, upon a Saturn-bended knee
with grave affect and hunchèd posture yield
to brief, impassive chill of hoary field?
Nay, but hold! With your ecstatic soul
that March may find you whole.
No fear is there, nor deep despair
can sink the warmèd shoal
of joy full-wed—
fed by sun
for wading arms to live life well
afloat the seas bright-dun
from morning-bell to twilit knell
yea still hold! With your ecstatic soul
that Spring the next, and next e'er new
with light unrued may find you whole."
The Narrator:
And saying their parts, the party all fell mute
and glanced from each to each, forsooth,
I've never heard such silence deep:
a vacuum, soul to steep.
And after one thought-lush eternity
from Sage's throat erupted such
a mirthly sound as none could match
and ere they all knew, caught such laughter
in their auric spheres that even Dismal Fear
could not resist.
Captured in sweet glee
the place lit up, revealing golden beams
and cherubim with ruby goblets,
sapphire rounds, and plenteous host
to share their joys and join with them
at bounteous feast.
And looking round, astonished found
their comrades not unknown,
but friends long-lost to sultry cost
of sorrow's taxing moan.
Then who could speak what tenderness,
what tears of understanding,
what sunbeamed smile followed
that clear gaze of apprehending?
Perhaps a defter pen than mine
could all these joys expound,
held not in throes of brightest chime
with which these halls resound.
Writing and images
By @d-pend
March 24, 2019
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What a joyous piece @d-pend,
Of all the 5 Celebrant speaks last and announces the obvious.
Silence to them all. Listen to the grass.
I enjoy the role of the apologetic role of the narrator and each of the five friends in rhyme.
They are all twitterpated .
@d-pend,
HOLY COW!!!
Dan ... an Epic in every sense of the word.
I will have to re-read it a dozen times.
Dan ... YOU ARE A "GREAT POET."
How long did this take? It is absolutely brilliant.
As soon as I hit post on this comment, I'm going to drop the link in the Power House Creatives Discord Channel. Then, I'm going to drop the link in a bunch of people's DM's, especially the ones who are connected to Curation groups. Then, I'm going to link it on Twitter.
People Who Are Not Poets ... I know this poem is a little dense to read the first time through, but that's the Art Form. I am a poet and I'm telling you, this was BRILLIANT. There are VERY FEW poets who could have pulled this off.
WHALES ... turn this in to a $1,000 Post.
Everyone ... upvote it at 100%.
Quill
@jaynie @bluemist @theycallmedan @nathanmars @mariusfebruary
Quill!
My friend... if this were rap, you'd be my hype-man. I'm so appreciative of you passing this piece along... and as always humbled that you think it's good enough to do so. This is my first stab at the "epic poem" tradition so beautifully preserved by countless poets... it is rather short in comparison with many of the great works that inspired it, such as Keats' Endymion, Shakespeare's plays, Chaucer's works, etc. But, one must start somewhere!
It took about a week to work on, though the bulk was written in a couple of hours. I spent a LONG time revising, especially in the first third of the piece where the rhythm is quite jarring... sort of akin to the awkwardness of conversation among strangers before they get into a flow.
I appreciate your #peoplewhoarenotpoets disclaimer—in fact, I think poetry is somewhat taxing to read even for poets! A language perpendicular to the ordinary: of the same world, but viewed in such a way that things appear alien. Whether writing or reading it, poetry demands something of the attention that prose does not.
Again, I can't think you enough for the support, and I hope you've been well since I've been away from Steemit!
Dan
@d-pend,
Massively impressed.
Quill
Greetings, @d-pend
After such a long absence, it was only befitting that you came up with something this long and deep.
I have to comment on the images first. I like your photographic experiments. The first two I love. I think the first one fuzzily illustrates what I felt about the poem and all these incarnations. The second one produces a juxtaposing sense of simplicity and complexity that epitomizes the extremes in tension here, we find ourselves somewhere in the middle.
I must confess the first reference or image that came to my mind was a rather tricial one: Sheldon Cooper in that episode of the Big Bang Theory where he faces at least 5 personalities and session to decide whether to grant admission to a 6th Sheldon (layback Sheldon).
I think that there is a connection there, but I don't have much time left to elaborate on that.
The second reference or image is a more classic one :)
Chaucer's Cantembury Tales
In the same way Chaucer's characters represent parts of the same society with all its corruption and virtues (although the virtues are hard to find in Chaucer's sharp satire), I see these 5 strangers as part of a whole that got fragmented along the way
More challenging than your poetry it must be for every one of us to get all our fragments together in such merry and healing conversation.
@hlezama,
Canterbury Tales ... That was my thought too.
Quill
@d-pend
That is just b-r-i-l-l-i-a-n-t. I am not fond of poetry, I confess. I only read it if I'm compelled to, like I did when I studied literature. As far as possible, I eschewed it in favour of fiction, largely because I love the worlds of fiction but in the main because my response to poetry was not that which my teachers wanted. Except, I hasten to add, The Bard's Sonnets and a bit of Chaucer and Spencer; I did also enjoy Homer - but that was as a translation. So, I find my self again compelled to read poetry our mutual friend @quillfire. Whom, of course, none dare defy, let alone reject.
I digress.
I love the ebb and flow of emotion through each character. Each so identifiable in our lives and in ourselves. Makes me think I should spend more time reading poetry.
You know, I was never overly fond of poetry either, at least until college. It only became meaningful to me when I began to write it myself. Even now, if I want to read something for pleasure, I prefer reading prose. When I have extra energy and am feeling gung-ho—that's when I pull out the poets. I probably enjoy poetry written in dramatic form the most: Chaucer, Shakespeare, etc. I am still not that widely read on the acclaimed poets, which I look forward to rectifying, gradually.
This is the first time I've written from explicitly varied viewpoints. I quite enjoyed it and think it made the piece a bit more digestible than when I try to compress myriad views into a few short lines, which can come off a bit schizophrenic. Definitely filing this approach away under "worthy of further exploration!"
I appreciate your candid comments and readership!
Dan
Good. I look forward to the results of such exploration.
You are welcome and I hope to be welcome in future.
Fiona
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Thank you @quillfire for alerting me to this masterpiece!! I'm with him ... HOLY COW!! this is amazing @d-pend!! I'm going to re-read it several more times tonight because I know I missed plenty on my first go through. Kind of at a loss for words too ...
Gladly resteemed, and I'm passing this on to c-squared as well. Truly outstanding :)
Hi @lynncoyle1! Thank you so much for reading this piece! This is the first poem of this length/type that I've written and I'm humbled that you find it good enough to re-read :-) I appreciate you passing it along too!
In gratitude,
Dan
The pleasure was all mine @d-pend :)
Ha! I started reading it and immediately thought of @quillfire!
Right?!?! :)
I love this:
The entire poem is worthy of praise. I tip my hat. Awesome verses, and worthy of the blockchain's attention.
Thanks for dropping a part that you liked. It helps a lot with a piece of such length... not quite knowing where I may have struck out, or struck gold. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it and took the time to read through.
@blockurator,
Block, me too. Gorgeousness.
Dan, Block's a poet too. And PHC.
Quill
@d-pend
I am totally, irrevocably wowed beyond wows.
Yes! Yes! I am speechless and delighted and overwhelmed with this!! How, when and where did you write this?
Upped and Steemed
!tip
@dswigle,
Denise, Dan's literary talents are astonishing. He is truly a poet's poet. This is an Epic ... worthy of being studied by all aspirants of the Art.
Dan, Denise too is a poet. And PHC.
Quill
I took it home with me. Because I had to. This is truly Epic and I am stunned by it. Oh, Quill yours always stun me, don't be shy!
This was so brilliant, I almost wished he hadn't shared it here, but, sent it in somewhere... It is that inspiring.
Oh, he is a poet and PHC, which I recognized. so I resteemed him so others could enjoy him and left his on the top of my page, so it would be first to be seen. I hope it does.
And Wow.
Very few post work such as this here on the chain. Brilliantly thought out and expressed. I will have to read this a few times in order to fully immerse my self in it. The true appreciation will come when all that was there for me to see is realized. I hope there is more to come!!?? My mind is hungry for it :-D
Magnificent, grandiloquent and so truthful. There is so much joy in sharing and so much heaven to see and yet most of the time we wallow on the floor of wailing.
A hug infinite, @d-pend!
This is beautiful, and as much as I hate to admit it, I didn't actually read the whole thing. The beginning, however is so awesome that I will spend the next several hours lamenting the fact that I no longer have leisure time to read as I once did.
Please continue writing epic poetry. I WILL get back to this and read it in its entirety.
#powerhousecreatives