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RE: Lovestruck - A Bloody Modern Fairy Tale - Part One
Wow!
Line after line is quotable, memorable - if you were a Goodreads author, the page would fill up with great lines. But so much more is going on than great prose. The feelings, the characters, I can't even begin to say how high-impact this is. Wow!
Thank you so much, Carol! I am about to post the next part but I really think it's going to get away from me and be too long to finish in time lol.
I ido have that fantastic closing line though and I know exactly what to do with it. Contest or no, I have you to thank for the inspiration :)