Ok, first of all I love the pairing with music to listen to, it works so well with the surreal dream sequence. It weaves a great thread through the first half, stringing the ideas in a new direction. I finished this feeling like maybe, maybe she was quitting a simulated life to struggle in a real one. There is a fair bit of room for interpretation in the dream aspect, which adds a lot of depth to the character. I also like her bosses reaction, I envisioned this scheme as a national one, weighed on the overall amount of person had given, vs what they would take in their remaining life, with a certain degree of disregard for how that may impact companies who had to just let employees walk away. You picked up on a lot in this!