RE: Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 3 - The Demonstration [NSFW]
Building on chapters one and two, you have continued to excel yourself with exceptional writing quality - true talent that only a few authors ever possess. I have been looking forward to chapter 3 all week after enjoying so much chapter 2, and I know you said this week would be very erotic - I am not prudish, but equally I do not entertain sexual fantasy. So for this weeks Chapter I did hold a concern that the story I had enjoyed so far would be tainted a little by excess - balance can be difficult and the temptation to over embellish with excessive word imagery can quickly ruin a good piece of work. I should however been more trusting of you as an author, this is quite perfect - building on chapter 1 and 2 the reader knows what to expect in this chapter - and you executed it perfectly. Your writing set's the scene, but leaves the perfect propotion for the reader to mentally create their own imagery, which can be as deeply erotic as the reader cares to imagine. I am already looking forward to Chapter 4, this would be a book that I could not put down - but in this story you are the Mistress that controls the subjects 😳
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It's all my editing team at @isleofwrite . It's basically a lump of text before they get to it. I have a few more chapters ready to fire but I am inspired to write more of them to give the editors team even more work. And you even more to expect.
Muahahahah! Not everyone gets the same treatment. I might just copy-paste all I have into the document shared with the editors team and give them a slight heart attack at the mass of text. If you've been looking for a reason to join the @isleofwrite and help out with editing and proofing - here it is. :)
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