Oh my... My heart was racing, wondering if the thing(s) were going to come and chase her down. UGH! My biggest nightmares are being chased by something unseen.
ACK!
Great job... but wow, do I feel unsettled now! I'm REALLY glad I didn't read this before bed!
I'm surprised it was so scary. XD I kinda worried it wasn't scary enough.
I'm glad it wasn't any scarier! I might be easily scared, I guess. I generally avoid horror and even dramatic suspense like the plague, in spite of the fact that I enjoy writing it. :) I thought it was great!