I was like halfway through when i noticed that there was no side by side, I had to scroll back to the beginning to see what I had overlooked, then i saw the reminder that the edit part was over and the story was just going to be told.
I liked this part, Dominic could see her, he really is growing in strength I guess.
LOL Sorry for the confusion.
The story changed even as I wrote it, yesterday. It evolved right before my eyes... maybe I should write that too?
Ahh... or maybe I should just bite the bullet and write that 'how to write' book...