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RE: Blood on the Moon - serialised EXCLUSIVE for Steemit! - 5
Such a good set-up, let people feel her fear, then her hesitancy, then see her fortitude. up next bravery? Strength? well I already see her as strong, as I am sure others do also. But the nagging question, Why, and what is she going to do. I think next chapter is gonna be one doozy of one.
You see, you're asking questions about her as you become more embroiled in her story. Thank you, you can see what's happening... but you're getting immersed :)