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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 3: Beautiful Corpse, Part 2
I am glad I read the remarks along with your stories, Like @flashfiction I really liked the last 3 lines. Poor Vivian, sometimes reality does bite. But seeing the truth, will she be able to accept it? Will Olivia be able to go through with her thought? And the eye, creature, the Child with no heart, or after it's birth did it start to beat? Will it be like it's father/ So many damn questions now, no longer about the dream states, but now about the waking reality states.