Let There Be Darkness | Illustration and poem

in #writing7 years ago (edited)

Let There Be Darkness

Illustration and poem by @ankapolo
in a creative collaboration with @Sunravelme

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Darkness is the absence of light.
Endless calm shadow
is the sleeping canvas.
Then light spilled -
a word muddying the silence.
White on black
violent and vivid
primary and secondary
There.
Let light force the form out.
Let it strip the surface bare.
A scorching sun inside a tear,
trapped on a moon-like skin.
The morning glow,
the harsh bearer of reality,
erases last-night's dream.
Beloved face of a stranger
remains in the dark.
Who was it?

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Thank you so much @sunravelme! I been trying to make this poem better, but if i do anything else i feel like i might choke it to death LOL, I also just discovered the poetry workshop on discord, so i'd love to hear your feedback as an experienced poet.

Absolutely, come see me in the workshop :) I love giving feedback

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