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RE: Silvanus and Empire, an Original Novel (Chapter Three)
I love your characters. They're richly detailed, and richly described. I instantly felt a connection with Caddoc, and I loved his exchange with "the Bloodhaired girl." Oren is exactly how I imagined him to be! Looking forward to chapter four.
Well thank you for the praise. In writing this, I made a conscious decision to focus on characters. I'm glad that's coming through!