[Original Novel] Metal Fever 2, The Erasure of Asherah, Part 31
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The structures looked burned out, but still occupied. Most of it just the charred skeletal remains of buildings that must’ve been razed by a competing cartel, after which the remnants didn’t bother to rebuild.
The blackened, rickety framework of girders and partially demolished walls housed row after row of molecular printers, first generation judging by the size. They must’ve paid a pretty penny for those back in the day.
Either that, or they deliberately sought out legacy hardware because the embedded security protocols preventing the printing of weapons and drugs was long since cracked. The manufacturer would also no longer bother to supply over the air updates. Molecular printers that old are typically recalled and destroyed in order to undermine...certain uses.
Uses like those I now witnessed in the mangrove swamp below. The age of the printers offered some meager degree of comfort; neither the drugs nor the guns that came out of them would be of terribly good quality. They would still have no trouble finding buyers for either.
It proved difficult to get an accurate headcount because of the crumbling structures obscuring them. I counted the ones hunched over computers and packaging ‘product’ in adjacent buildings, visible through partially collapsed walls.
Then I assumed the worst, that a similar number occupied every building I could see, plus the average of about twenty that could be seen milling about between the buildings at any given moment. That yielded a figure of a little over 100.
Steep odds, much too steep. I dreaded breaking the news to the chieftess, though she still seemed convinced that a nonviolent solution was possible. I heard the undergrowth rustle behind me, and my heart leapt into my throat at the sight of three remnants on patrol.
They walked straight past, not twenty feet away, somehow oblivious to my presence. I held my breath until they disappeared into the dense darkness of the jungle. Were they blind? Too high out of their minds to see an intruder crouched in plain sight, a stone’s throw away?
Glancing down at my body made sense of it. The outer surface bore a pattern of coloration which blended perfectly into my surroundings. Beyond anything I have seen a chameleon do, more comparable to the capabilities of cuttlefish skin.
I released the contents of my lungs in a ragged, terrified sigh. If I wasn’t so tense, I might’ve pissed myself right then. I’d been in such a rush to evaluate the strength of the enemy, it didn’t occur to me what a blunder it was to do so before I fully understood the suit’s features.
Then again, I didn’t need to know about the camoflage. It kicked in right when I needed it most. That implied a troubling degree of intelligence hiding in the suit. An organism unto itself, apparently able to recognize threats and take pre-emptive measures to protect my life from them.
I closed my eyes, activated my video recording app and captured some footage of the remnant base for later review. Zooming in revealed a few wore full American Action officer’s regalia, while the rest wore only the trousers of their uniforms with white undershirts and helmets on account of the heat.
All looked ragged and feverish, no doubt sampling their own wares on the regular. But the poorly painted metallic mass bobbing gently in the canal interested me most of all. I know a narco sub when I see it.
Not one of Dave’s that I could tell, too competently built. I still somehow expected he had some hand in all this, simply because experience told me that I’d find his fingerprints on anything sufficiently fucked up. The sub must be how they transport product from their manufacturing base here in the swamp to some clandestine pickup point either on shore, or an especially lawless seastead.
A rusted snorkel and exhaust pipe protruded from either end of the craft. Fossil fuel powered? Like the very first military submarines, if I remember right. It should be able to travel on battery power underwater for some ways, then come just close enough to the surface that the snorkels poke through.
One would then suck in air for the combustion engine while it spins an alternator, recharging the batteries. The other would expel the noxious exhaust. What a archaic, dirty setup! But it’s not as if there’s anybody around to fine them for the emissions.
Probably they also couldn’t get their hands on the high grade batteries they would need to make the entire trip submerged, either. I immediately began working out a plan to jack the sub right under their noses, but no matter how I tried to connect the dots, I didn’t get the picture I wanted.
A hundred plus remnants, most or all of them tweaking, is no laughing matter. Every one of them trained soldiers, with a lifetime of experience hiding from Habsec out here in the wild. I only just killed a man for the first time today. I’m no match for even one of them, on even footing.
The organic arsenal my arm is stuck elbow deep in changes the equation somewhat, as does the armor. But a hundred to one? A hundred and twenty, more likely? I would need a hardsuit and some drones. Maybe a tank? Ideally both.
If I could persuade the villagers to fight, it could tip the scales. After growing each of them some armor and weaponry from the seeds that gross fucking plant vagina pooped out, I mean. If I could only make them see that their total devotion to the feminine spirit, to gentleness and nurture was going to result in the extinction of their culture.
For all of its many splendors, that dimension of the human spirit is ill equipped for combat. It is but half of the unified whole, counterbalanced by the oft reviled but eternally necessary aggression of the male spirit.
Without one, what am I but a brutal monster with no redeeming qualities, which nobody can or should love? But without the other...what am I but a warm, soft, gelatinous blob waiting to be torn apart by the first ruffian who comes along?
I’ll make them understand. They have to. If they don’t, there will soon be nothing left of them to bury. Their remarkable blessings, bestowed upon them by Asherah, will fall into the worst possible hands. With weapons like the one fashioned for me back in the village, they would go from being nothing but job security for Habsec to an authentic menace.
Having decided on what I would say to the chieftess and any of her subjects willing to listen, I silently inched away from the ridge and doubled back the way I came. Nothing for me to do here. Not yet, and not by myself, unless my goal is to add another body to the pile.
The return was complicated by the absence of any identifiable trail. Not that I wished for one, and in fact took great care not to leave any indication that someone had recently come this way. As I trekked through the stinking hot jungle, I wondered to myself why it’s always fucking tweakers.
Neo Nazis? Tweakers. Remnants? Tweakers. I don’t know if radical Muslims are tweakers, those explosive vests don’t leave enough behind to perform a drug test on. It wouldn’t surprise me though. Something about the manic, hyperactive headspace lends users towards ideologies predicated upon absolutism, and exclusionary elitism.
Maybe I’ll understand what all goes on in their heads after I blow a couple of ‘em open so I can see inside. The surge of bloodlust I felt swelling within me came as a surprise. Am I a killer? I wasn’t yesterday. I’m going to have to become on though, aren’t I? I’m going to have to kill my way out of this.
The rustle of ferns tickled my eardrum. I instinctively ducked behind the nearest tree. It might just be villagers, but I didn’t care to risk it. Only, when I peered around the edge of the tree, it was neither villagers nor remnants that I saw marching through the jungle just a dozen yards away.
It was half a dozen fullmetal enforcers, identical in design to the ones that died in the crash, stomping along in rank and file. My back stiffened, pupils dilated. Death on two legs, multiplied by six. I recalled the chieftess mentioning a second VTOL landing nearby, I just thought I had more time.
They’ve got no way to track me that I know of. If they did, I’d be dead already. I ought to be like a needle in a haystack out here. All I could figure is that they found the crash site, then searched in a spiral pattern outwards from that point.
...Which would lead them to the village, if they haven’t already found it. Anxiety gripped me, and brought nausea along for the ride. My stomach gurgled. One of the enforcers stopped in its tracks, gesturing for the others to do the same. Shit. Fuck. Shit.
Really? God fucking damnit, really? This is how I die? I held perfectly still, hoping the camoflage would fool them. Only short lived confusion instead. “He’s right there” I picked up, audio amplified by my hearing implant. “Some kind of optical cloak I’m guessing. Switch to thermal, he’s still slightly warmer than the-”
I blasted the approaching squad with acid. It had no effect on their bodies, but did rapidly eat away at the rifles of the nearest three. Their confused, angry chatter faded away behind me as I frantically bounded off into the jungle, desperate to reach the village and warn them.
...But after running for about a minute, I slowed to a stop and had an epiphany. A foolish gambit may be the more accurate descriptor, but those have paid off for me more often than not in the past. I hid, waited for the six hopping mad metallic assassins to reach me, then darted away in the opposite direction while whooping at the top of my lungs.
More muffled swearing behind me. At least I wasn’t dodging bullets. But if the acid didn’t stop them, it raised troubling questions as to how I planned to actually kill them once the wild goose chase came to its inevitable end.
Not my problem. I’ll let the remnants figure that out. I ran straight for the mangrove swamp, noting familiar trees and rocks along the way. “Who are those men?” asked a voice in my head. It didn’t immediately register, panicked as I was.
When it repeated the question, I wondered if perhaps fear had driven me mad, or if I was experiencing after-effects from the tea. “They don’t seem friendly” the voice concluded. Well, he’s not wrong. The voice did sound discernibly male.
“Look, whoever you are, I don’t know how you got access to my system but this is a bad time” I shouted over the sound of air rushing past. The plant armor boosted my speed considerably, propelling me through the dense foliage at about 28 miles per hour according to my inertial sensors.
The enforcers are faster though. In the distance I could just make out the weighty impact of their feet sinking into the soil and pushing off, six precision engineered killing machines now hot on my heels. “Is this the ultimate reality?” the voice queried.
“For fuck’s sake. How old are you? Is this your parents’ connection? I’m running for my life, fuck off!” The voice responded with unexpected concern. “It was a long and difficult journey to find you. I’m not going to be turned away so easily, and not while you’re in danger. You’re the one who built the bicycle from scrap, aren’t you? The one who stole the flying machine, who speaks to dolphins and undertakes many illegal activities.”
I asked between breaths, struggling to form sentences as I ran, how he could possibly know all that. “I’ve seen it. It’s all here, I’m looking at it now. I believe these are recordings of events which occurred at various points in your past. You’re some sort of criminal, right? Is that why those men are after you?”
The spirit Asherah mentioned. Of all the fucking points it might’ve resurfaced, now was the least opportune. “Look, can we do this later? I’m trying to pull something off here. I honestly don’t know if I’m gonna get out of this alive.”
The voice fell silent for a moment before answering. “I can help you fight them.” I laughed. “No buddy, trust me. These guys are serious. They make the Mexican drug cartels look like the Hab Scouts.” It mulled this over.
“I’ve spent the past several days practicing combat against some of the highest ranked adversaries in the world. Where they are clumsy and learn very slowly, I have learned many times more quickly until nobody remained who could challenge my skills. I don’t know why, but as much as I recoiled from it at first, it comes naturally to me. I have a talent for it.”
Again, I told it to shut the fuck up until I wasn’t in mortal danger. Just like that, it vanished. Minutes later, still hoofing it through the brush and leaping over fallen logs, I began to wonder if I’d imagined the whole exchange.
At last, I came upon the mangrove swamp. The nearest few remnants froze, startled by the sight. I don’t blame them, it’s not every day the fucking Jolly Green Giant is the herald of your doom. I blasted them with thorns, not wishing to kill them before their agonized screams could alert the rest.
Glancing over my shoulder I spotted the enforcers, almost upon me. I rushed into the center of the burnt out structures and ducked behind a dilapidated brick wall as if I meant to fight them. A remnant took a pot shot at me out of a second story window.
The plant material absorbed the bullet, diffusing the impact throughout the entire suit...then spat it out. I didn’t care to test whether it could do the same with a thousand all at once though. The enforcers barged into the midst of the remnants before spotting most of them, their apparent leader once again sticking its arm out to halt the rest.
It was too late, though. They were balls deep in a bucking bronco that was about to trample them flat like a couple of tin cans. The gunfight that erupted a moment later was deafening. They weren’t even paying attention to me though, all focus was now fixed the gravest, most immediate threat.
Stay Tuned for Part 32!
"I closed my eyes, activated my video recording app and captured some footage of the remnant base for later review." I wish my eye's could do that!
Google Glass! But don't wear them into a movie theater.
I'm surprised I got something right last time. ;-}. This was a good move on his part, when he started running toward the village I thought why not lead them back to the remnants and let them take care of each other. Glad to see he did. Also, we got to hear from mr head room again. The dream guy is going to be interesting I am sure.
Oh I just realized you continued these series! Nice!
outstading writting skill.
thank you very much.
I did not fully read your story. But now I'll read the story. Hopefully the story will be good.
Mindblowing! This part has been great.
your writing very nice ''and amazing stories.....
tonight will be awesome collection of stories wow
You put out new parts so quick, I love how you don't keep us on our toes for too long :).
nice story amazing
i read part 1 2 3