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RE: Where Poets Dream and Cry Poetry Challenge - Unfinished (Original Poem)
The end of each of your stanzas is so captivating, Inna, but in different ways each time and some of your imagery here is so unique that i'm not sure i've ever come across it.
your first stanza culminates in an appeal to the reader's senses, sight feel and smell, then bright and vibrant imagery to lead you the grassy knoll of nostalgia. The surreal fever dream of sieving memories through reflections of glass in opaque lighting, and a tangible reality that exists somewhere in between it all, it's so good.
this poem such an enjoyable read, like each 'turn of the page' is revealing something that truly feels new.
thank you so much for sharing, Inna.
Thank you for the lovely commentary (and the help) :-) It is all truly appreciated. Not sure just how unique any of it is. Hell - I'm not convinced anything we write hadn't already been written a million times. But I am glad it touched you.
we certainly stand on the back of giants, Inna, you are definitely correct that originality can't be judged in a vacuum.
that said, i'm glad the 1 millionth and 1 time it was written, it was written here where i could read it. <3