Interesting story! I wonder if this is based on true life or a fictional product.

Either way, it was a very good production. The "fantasy world" introduction was amusing. I had a good laugh! But sometimes daydreaming makes our day. For as long as we do not totally live in our dreams and it has no cost anyway, so why not? Right?

The main actor Jed did a very good gesture of not storming his father's mistress, aunt Mila, and instead kept his cool. His control gave him the chance to better understand his aunt Mila. If he lost control, it could just lead to more misunderstanding between them. This is one thing that everyone should learn to control anger and emotion.

It is sad that Jed got to know his father only when the father is already dead. Though, nature has its way. Overall, your story gives us a moral lesson of not quickly judging a book by its cover which applies in all walks of life. We never know what is happening inside someone's life until we become at least a piece of it.

Great composition you have there!

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It is an entry to this: Pay It Forward Curation Contest (Kaya English ang comment ko hehehe...)

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