Word Poetry Challenge #10 : Smile" (An Original Poetry ➕ Analysis & Notes)
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A feeling, a sensation that brightens,
it's like the savvy sunset that lightens,
See the daisies curves into a dazzling shape,
the face is reborn,
happiness is planted within,
the mouth curves in approval,
a slightly beautiful shape of happiness,
the beauty of a sweet smile.
The heart is bubbling with glee,
a sunflowers is dazzling,
like the giggles of a newborn,
friends sharing a beautiful photo,
black and white with old memories,
brings drizzles of smiles and satisfied feelings,
never a moment of tear,
when the face is wrapped in amusement
A mother's joy,
captivates funny moments,
the fulfilment of a happy father
the sweet bread days shared,
at breakfasts and dinner
leaving the face scooped in brilliant smile,
of funny moments and sweet times
Smiles,
An adulation of self comfort,
that germinates beautiful affection,
a loving tenderness,
A sentimental of sweet elegance,
bursting forth like a sea of smiles.
POETIC NOTES & ANALYSIS
This is a descriptive piece that narrates the meaning and the essence of a smile. The emotion within, whether a quite sad one or a happy one can spark off a smile, the poem drives the essence of a smile to things that are symbolic, like a family reunion where people gather to share the fondest of memories, or a group of friends looking at a photograph they took a long time ago. It can also surface when a mother is looking at her infant child learning how to take his first step, or even the simplest of joke a family share at dinner times.
However the poem's aim is to paint pictures of the simplest and most original forms of a smile the instances it can be shared, and the moments it takes to happen.
The poem narrates the fact that a smile can be as a result of anything that leaves the heart gladdens, it's essentially not only from the curving of the face but also from a fulfilment, the emotion feels deep within.
The loveliest of memories and day dreams of situations that suddenly flashes past the heart can bring about a silent period of smiles without even prior knowledge, this is because this emotion that brings this smiles is involuntary and the moment it's activated lightens up the face in a beautiful smile.
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
7/8/2018
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JOSEPH C.IKECHUKWU
This is absolutely insane ! Super cool. You got my 100% upvote. Thank you for joining :)
Wow thank you so much buddy, I'm glad you like this, thank you for the UPVOTE too 😀😀
Wao! I love this. Keep up painting the world with your muse
Certainly buddy, I guess it's been a long time I did a contest so I decided to join this one though Haha, well I'm glad you liked it
Yea, it's been a while since i participate in contest, i might join soon once am finished with my fantasy of a story writing
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