Word Poetry Challenge #3 : Bleeding LovesteemCreated with Sketch.

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Dirty, father look not beneath
Guilty, sinful, how horrible
Kneeling down, please, I plead
Father, spirit, look not down.
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Betrayed, torn cloth, now doomed
Saviour to savage, saint to sinful
Destiny orb, lays in Pilate palm
Lonely, hungered, no one, no fam.
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Heavy, weak, cross, burden
Each steps heavy laden
Skull nearing, man is ridden
If they all know, for them am walking
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Bleeding love, father look not down
Only son, nailed, a prince of peace
Teary eyes, God can't save himself
Watched as His Spirit yield..

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#christian-trail
#christianity

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This is my entry into @jassennessaj in a #wordchallenge

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Great poem.

I know the poem talks about Jesus' suffering on the way to the cross...great poem

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