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well, no. this is for external presentation to outside investors and potential super-users. There is no point in "circle-jerking" when the whole world out there is full of investors with money and great power :) Got to get them invested in Steemit ;)

Good luck.
I have a suggestion.
De-emphasize the 'make money' aspect
Emphasize "have a lot of fun' aspect.
(that would require making the GUI easier to use)

If we can have people sign up just to have fun (money is just a bonus) then they'll stay longer.
What is it that Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc can do that Steem can't do?

Noted. Steem can do everything that the other social medias can do. Steem can also do everything that banks can do. In addition to that - it can pretty much do everything that everything can do. We will see some serious releases at #steemfest so you can expect a lot of new things to surface as we move forward and polish the system to perfection.

I´ll definitely add something "have a lot of fun" on the next draft. :)

Thank you for great constructive critique.

Thank you. I'm looking forward to your report on steemfest (I assume there will be one)
"Have a lot of fun" (the entertainment industry) is BIG money.
People pay a LOT for it.
Imagine the advantage we will have if we can ever get our act together in such a way that Steem will PAY people to have fun.
It's a marketing challenge.
How to keep the riff-raff, quick buck artists...OUT.
And attract ma and pa kettle and Jane and Joe SixPack?

I know people who invest for fun, too. They're professionals, they want a return, but the real reason they do it is they like doing it-- participating in building novel things that help people.

I'd make the whole thing shorter, but you're absolutely on the right track here.

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