Philippine Poetry and Song Contest #1, Maja BlancasteemCreated with Sketch.

in #wikang-filipino7 years ago (edited)

Kinagabihan, binisita kita,
tulad ng dati, nakahiga ka pa rin sa kama,
kahit mahirap, kahit masakit
pinilit mo pa ring tumayo at lumapit.

"Ma, bumili ako ng paborito mo"
sabay tingin sa dala dala ko
"di ko naman paborito yan"
"pero pwede ng pag-tyagaan"

Natulog ako ng walang pangamba
alam ko kasi bukas makikita ulit kita
pag uwi ko galing eskwela
sabi nila patay ka na

Ang sakit palang mawalan ng isang ina,
lalo na kung ikaw ung huli nyang nakasama
labing limang taon na rin ang nakakaraan
sariwang sariwa pa rin sa aking puso at isipan

Kung pwede lang bumalik
kung pwede lang umulit
kung pwede lang sana,
"Ma bibili ulit kita ng maja blanca"

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Bakit ang lungkot naman kapatid...

Nakakahomesick tuloy. 2 years nko di nakakauwi to see my family. 😢


Anyway, mahusay! May kick sa puso... good luck!

@arrliinn

From the heart po kasi ma'am, true story of my last night with my mom, sorry if I made you sad :-(

I'm sure your family miss you too, hope that you'll see each other soon

Sa aking pagka basa sa yong tula
Aking na alala, mahal kong ina
Bigyan ko sya ng pa halaga habang buhay pa
Baka mahuli na ang lahat pag sya'y wala na...
Salamat kapatid, may kurot man sa puso
Ang tula mo'y may kapalit na bunga.

Thank you for reading my simple poem, :-)

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Aww. Napakalungkot ng kanta at napakamakapangyarihan. Nawa'y magsilbing aral ito na dapat sulitin ang mga panahong nabubuhay pa ang ating mga magulang.

Maraming salamat, kabayan!

Best of luck!

Salamat ng marami

ayy may kirot sa heart 😞 Mahusay kaibigan!
Good luck 👌

Salamat, good luck din, nabasa ko ung sa u, lupit, para sa mga new heroes natin,

more success sa mga OFW :-)

Salamat! Andaming magagandang entry 👌 good luck sa'tin! 😊

Nice poetry @rye05 😊.

Thank you Sir :-)

nakakaantig damdamin

Yeah, for us to value time we spend with our loved ones :-)

ohhhh kapatid :(:( .speechless

Sorry :-(

Astig nito sir nice

Thank you for reading :-)

oh kay sarap ng maja blanca aking paborito malinamnam katakamtakam .

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