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RE: We-Write #11: Home Alone

in #wewrite7 years ago

dear @vida-blanca you wrote a really good story. certainly with a dramatic ending, which we hope will never happen! but you have been able to describe these two children well with their problems, their pasts in which the lack of love has marked their lives. beautiful their initial friendship, defense from bullies, the link between the two. many children make "fake" pacts of blood, but in this case I think you wanted to show how some games can influence those little minds to become violent and commit dangerous actions. keep on and congratulations on your curie rating

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