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RE: "Phantom!" - We-Write #12 with @owasco
A nice continuation. Actually not a continuation but a separate piece as it exists in almost polarly opposite cognition. @owasco presence is derisive, almost caricature, while yours is of a sentimental rhapsody.
I liked how softly and smoothly you waltzed away from the enigmatic hint left by @owasco and filled the story with the endearing soul plucking smoosh (smoothie).
Great job!
ohhhh man, this is why I'm so daunted by we-writes. From @owasco's "derisive, almost caricature," I shift to a "sentimental rhapsody." You articulated that very well. All I could figure was that the wit and humor were washed out of the second (my) half.
Please oh please spell it out for me: what is the "enigmatic hint left by @owasco" that I bypassed?
Thank you for reading and commenting!