There were no mistakes on this post. What you're doing is spam. You have a high enough reputation on Steemit to recognize that this is bad Steemit etiquette. Never come to someone else's quality post and drop your low quality spam in their comment section. It's rude and it will earn you flags - which is what I will be giving you now. Hopefully you will learn from this behavior and not continue. If you want to attract people to your own posts - then write your own content.