Kidnapped! Weekend Freewrite

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Kidnapped

Prompt #1

My only defense was to write down every word they said.

I was surrounded by shady looking characters. The leader of the gang glowered at me, a deep scar leading from nose to ear pulled his nose up in an unnatural way and exposed a canine in the right side of his mouth.

"We got nothing to say to you, lady.

I scribbled on my notepad furiously. I felt sweat popping under my shirt.

Why was the new reporter assigned to this terrifying gang???

"We aren't moving!"

"Well, I appreciate your position," I weakly stated.

The bald member with a missing tooth pounded his fist on a desk loaded with beer bottles and an empty pizza box. The bottles rattled and one fell and shattered on the cement below and I flinched instinctively.

"We ain't giving up the building, it's ours!"

I scribbled the bald member's statement.

"The new apartment complex will hold 200 people and we need this space to house the local workers," I replied, as instructed.

Promp #2

Eloise was my half-sister, but everyone thought she was my cousin, she was the only one I told about my assignment at the strip outside the factory complex.

My phone vibrated on the desk by me. The short guy with a soul patch growled,
"Who is that? The news??"

A tall scrawny guy spoke,
"Boss, grab the phone!"

The scar guy nodded and snatched my phone and answered.

"Thanks for the peace offering, but we're gonna keep her!"

I heard Eloiuse scream on the other end.

"If you want her back, we want $1,000,000 by noon tomorrow!"

He pocketed my phone with a sly smile.

"Your boss is an idiot, lady."

The bald man was behind me and grabbed my wrists and wrapped them in a tight leather strap, the scar man pulled some duct tape from his coat and put a strip over my mouth.

If I get out of this, I'm quitting the Tribune.

Prompt 3

The last time they saw a movie, Eloiuse passed out when the murderer entered the room. Of all people to be the only one to know my whereabouts, my chances of escape just dropped exponentially. She was most likely passed out where she sat.

A loud knock startled my captors at the door.

"Who the hell is that!" The scarred man roared at his gang.

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Omg, this was making my eyes grow as I read. I really really REALLY hope it continues. :-) Maybe Eloiuse will be braver than expected. :-)

Thank you so much for your encouragement. I think Louise has more to her than even she knows!

This is definitely a cool write-up. I especially love your diction and the imagery!

Thank you so much! I am glad that the story made a little sense. <3

Seriously time to find a new job... I hope that knocking is by a burly pizza guy with a penchant for saving journalists!

Time for you Freewriters to pamper yourselves!

The massage snakes are ready.
A spider facial is laid out.
This next prompt sounds relaxing,
...unless you flail and shout!

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Thank you so much! I really feel weak at the whole plot thing but these prompts are helping me make headway and stretching me! This one was difficult come prompt 2!
Thanks for the daily link! <3

Now that would be a saving grace, for sure! Thanks for the link, much appreciated!

You too are letting us hang? what is going to happen????

lol .... maybe Louise has something up her sleeve, or maybe the debt collector is outside looking for Mr. Bald guy..... hmmm
Thanks for reading <3

Oh geez, I am squeamish like Eloise. Hopefully she found her super powers and came a-knocking!

I think Louise has more in her than we are prone to believe when trouble really hits! Thanks for reading and commenting!

This turned out GREAT that 2nd prompt was really hard to deal with!! You did great!!

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