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RE: The Weekend Freewrite- 1/5/2019 - by @blueeyes8960
I was a bit confused with how the story started, but it is a great one!
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I was a bit confused with how the story started, but it is a great one!
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I was confused too on the prompt. The post said it was "I was Tuesday" and I thought it maybe was supposed it to be "It was Tuesday" but I just went with what it said. So in the story Callie's day to be called out for courier duty was Tuesday. As in for instance I'm Tues, you're Wed, she's Thurs in discussing a schedule. Guess it was a little hard to follow... 🤔
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Well only the first lines, but after that is was easy to follow and great to read. As I read it for the 2nd time it was no problem at all. You managed to make a great thriller out of it!
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