Pretty good. Though, it's a truly unjust thing to hold someone accountable for actions they did not truly comprehend as they were performing them. It's the basic reason why we don't prosecute or jail children, even if they were partially or wholly responsible for something terrible happening. If these beings could drag the player in front of a kind of court as they did, they probably should have told her earlier that the game she was playing was not merely a game. You could argue they are at fault as well in this case.

But I'm just over-analyzing this. Good story.