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RE: Into the twilight (Weekend freewrite)
Congratulations on being curied, @marie-jay!
You have so many great insights woven into the narrative. This really hits me: I never left those on her nightstand, not that I was afraid she might end her life, but... oh man, the "but"!
Powerful ending. That surprise twist. And then, looking back, I see it's been foreshadowed; we should have seen it coming. Love it!
Thanks a lot, Carol!