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6 years ago in #weekendfreewrite by byn (63)
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STOP"I was so nervous that my sweat was sweating."
Totally lawled at that! Loved the twisty ending as well - nicely done!
Thank you :) I almost changed that because I wasn't sure it sounded like I intended, but I hoped it was funny, so I left it!
So glad you did! It added a nice bit to her personality, which made the ending even more owie.
Oh! It was funny :)
Loved it!! Great work @byn!
Thank you! These awesome comments really lifted my spirits today!
Aww I'm so glad:) We don't compliment each other in real life enough I think!
so, she was fooled!! there was only one part when it was a bit rough - all the power talk. The story itself is solid. Maybe spend a few minutes tweaking it - or not...
I don't know that I found it inspired enough to tweak. I still have a document full of stories that I want to flesh out and tweak. This is definitely not my genre! :) Thanks for the comment.
hahaha - joke on you!! You didn't like it, but someone did!!!! LOL
Yeah, doesn't that just figure? :) I guess I have really bad taste in stories!!!
Such a great story! Wow!
Thank you so much! The kinds words really make my day :) I appreciate you!
Wow very vice story.... I was inspired by you to become a writer! God bless and Congratulations....@byn!
Whoot! That is awesome!!! I love to inspire others <3
I love a story when there's always a twist at the ending!
Love it!
Thank you so much. I am happy that people enjoyed it :)
Your post was very touching. I especially adored the part where you wrote you closed your eyes and you felt a headache coming on. I can truly relate to this too my life right now. It's experiences that make us push ourselves too extreme brain power ! Positive vibes always 🤘🏻👌🏻
Thanks for the comment!
Some people would thank that woman for her ”sacrifice.” A little saddening.
Nice story.