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6 years ago in #weekendfreewrite by byn (63)
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This is a really great concept, and I'm looking forward to seeing the story develop!
Thanks. I'm hoping I can focus long enough to get more thoughts out before any more plot twists pop up in freewrite challenges!
Thanks for the comment!
@byn
Now I want to buy the book. Keep writing; I'm hooked.
Thank you! I was just telling my husband that I was thinking of taking this story and making it a separate ebook or something. I've started writing on the long version off and on and it's coming together into quite the story!
Wow really cool!
It hooked me up, now I want MOAR! hehehe
Great storytelling skill @byn, following now
Thank you! I'm working on a full out story from these freewrites. The whole family already had me intrigued and now there is a possible secret agent in the mix? I must write to find out more! :)
Thanks for the comment!
@byn
its just like a pocket book..you have a very rich mind
Thank you. My mind is definitely FULL of stories!
How can you stop here - we need to know!!!! I don't think we should give you any more prompts until this story is finished!!! LOL
I thought I replied to this already, but this weekend freewrite theme is morphing into a full out book. I've got pages and pages written now, so I'll probably have to find a new theme for my weekend freewrites before I make it any more complicated! :)
I love it!!! Have you submitted any of your work to the Isle of Write for their publications?
No... I'm not sure I have anything that fits the guidelines at this point. I'll have to go reread the requirements.
Holy beans, you guys are really raising the bar on prompt delivery!!! :)
Great story - very gripping. I loved the magical powers bit.
Yeah, I'm really excited to delve into that aspect. It's something new for me!
@byn
Love these ideas you have here, @byn! Keep them coming! :)
Thank you for reading!
Hi Byn! Post last week's freewrite in with those for today! Come on, don't be keeping it a secret! LOL!!
I'm happy that you're continuing this family's story! (Here's to hoping that Eloise doesn't manifest any powers. Then again, maybe she'd get over herself and regret being such a bitch.) They're going to have to stick together to outsmart those sneaky government spies. Good thing her mother has shown her a new way to communicate!
It's awkward because last weekend's freewrite should have come before this one! Of course, I'm ALSO writing out (or trying to!) this story as a more fully fleshed out story. I just keep getting distracted by life. :)
Thanks for the support and encouragement!
@byn
This is great @byn I also can't wait to read the rest :D
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!